BRIEF 13 - THREAD - FEEDBACK AND LOGO DEVELOPMENT

From the crit I received mixed feedback in that people throught the work I had produced was relevant and appropriate but they also gave me some tips and other things I should think about. They suggested that I experiment and play more with the logo with a stroke through it and also to see if anything could be done with that and negative space. 

After this feedback, I did exactly what was suggested and tried to experiment more with the logo.

After I experimented with the stroke concept I still thought my other cover ideas were better, mainly due to their versatility. Saying this I do like the serif lowercase THREAD with the thin stroke through it and the uppercase sans-serif that has the stroke remover through the whole word, however, they are not as strong or as interesting as my other cover ideas and are also slightly cliched.